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(Contains: strong language)
Fandom: YouTube
Pairing: Phan
Warning: Written entirely in text-talk








15:43 Phil: Heya Danosaur :D
15:49 Dan: Heyy
15:50 Phil: Wassup?? Why werent u @ skool????
16:02 Dan: Sick.
16:05 Phil: Awwww, poor Danny! :) Come in 2morrow?? Pwease???? <3
16:11 Dan: I’ll try
16:13 Phil: Where’s my BFF heart??!!
16:14 Dan: ……. <3…… g2g




12:49 Phil: Daaaaaaan where r u???
12:56 Dan: library
12:57 Phil: come outside
12:59 Dan: No. Too cold.
13:02 Phil: What’s wrong??
13:05 Dan: Nothing. Just let me eat in peace!
13:07 Phil: <3
13:11 Phil: ????????
13:13 Dan: ur such a child <3


19:04 Phil: Wassup??
19:15 Dan: The ceiling
19:17 Phil: Lol no. Srsly. U didnt sit next 2 me @ skool all day. We barely spoke.
19:21 Dan: And????
19:25 Phil: I want to know what I’ve done!!
19:31 Dan: dw
19:33 Phil: Ok… c u <3
19:42 Phil: <3
19:47 Dan: gdnite
19:53 Phil: <3


16:19 Phil: Dan, are you ok?? I saw what they did. Can I come over????
16:22 Dan: like u care
16:23 Phil: Dan, please! I didnt know. Pls believe me.
16:25 Dan: Theyre ur friends. of course u fuckin knew about wat they do 2 me
16:29 Phil: I ddnt Dan. Rlly. God, I saw u cryin and it broke my heart. </3  :’(
16:33 Dan: touching
16:36 Phil: is it true???
16:44 Dan: wat??
16:45 Phil: r u gay????  
16:59 Dan: Yeah. Now fuck off.
17:09 Phil: <3



03:27 Dan: <3
03:34 Phil: <3 <3 <3 <3 xxxxxxxx
03:36 Phil: y r u awake???
03:40 Dan: thinking. wbu?
03:42 Phil: same…. thinkin about you. I really didn’t know, Dan.
03:44 Dan: I know. I’m sorry.
03:45 Phil: u no I dont care, right? gays cool. actually… I think i might b bi
03:47 Dan: xxxx how do u no??? :)
03:51 Phil: there’s this boy i like. A lot….
03:56 Dan: oh….. who
04:02 Phil: look in a mirror <3
04:04 Dan: ur sooooooo cheesy <3
04:07 Phil: Wat does that mean??? ;)
04:09 Dan:  …. ily xxxx
04:11 Phil: YAYAYAYAYAYAY :D XXXXXXX
14:13 Dan: ahem
14:14 Phil: I mean….. ily2
:iconcorporaterockwhore:
Okay, right, before I get a shit-tonne of people telling me I can't write, please let me explain this. Okay? Okay. Thanks.

In English class we've been learning about the language of text-talk and exploring how people can set tone, emotion etc using 'textese' or 'slanguage'. Basically, you're meant to be able to tell someone's mood from things like how long it takes them to text back or how their response is written. For example, when Phil uses mostly full words, that's meant to show his seriousness and when Dan takes a long time to reply that's because he's upset so doesn't feel like talking/facing Phil.

Put simply, the idea behind this piece of crapola was to write a story with emotion using only text messaging. I have a feeling that I failed miserably.

Just in case you were wondering, the story-line behind the texts was; Dan was being bullied by Phil's friends for being gay (which is a kinda secret), Dan couldn't take it so took a day off, Phil got worried because he was completely oblivious, Dan avoided Phil, Phil saw his friends bullying Dan and then they made up/got together.

Anyways, sorry for this horrifically long note, but I hope this wasn't too awful and please let me know what you think! :D
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~crazy4carrots4louis Mar 10, 2013  Student Writer
Im dyiNG THIS IS TOO ADORABLE
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:iconxblackcatx13x:
Usually I find this type of language annoying as hell, but this is so cute, and original and asdfghjkl;
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*CorporateRockWhore Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I usually find it annoying too, but I'm glad you think it's alright! :iconamazingheartplz:
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:iconicanbakecupcakes:
I loved this! The concept is very original and I didn't expect someone could put so much emotion in a story written in text message only. I've read this like 10 times already, it was just so cute <3
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*CorporateRockWhore Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm really glad you like it! :iconphanplz:
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~Katie-Venerelli Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awz :squee:
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*CorporateRockWhore Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icondanheartplz:
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~Katie-Venerelli Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconphilheartplz:
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:icondramallama42:
I've read this like 5 times. Too much adorableness!!
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