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Now that I have the means
I know I could do it.
Because right now
I don't want to pull through it.

I don't have many friends,
And all things have ends.
A bloody blade will be mine,
Slicing me open one final time.

I only ever take,
I'll take my life
For everyone's sake;
My one selfless act.

I want to see silver,
Splattered with red.
I want to cease breathing;
I just want to be dead.
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Selfless is to do something for the benefit of others.
Taking something so beautiful as your life will pain us.
Pain is something that makes you happy, but not us.
Our lives depend on yours.
Do not take it.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I won't. :hug:
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for assuring that.
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Rosalinda16 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Actually it wouldn't be a selfless act: it would be QUITE selfish of you to take such an amazing person and talented poet from us!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
I know you might want to be dead.. but I don't want you to be.

Lovely peice by the way.

Truly if you need to talk it is no trouble at all. :huggle:

Oh I'm also listening to you singing on youtube and you have a great voice ^_^
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :hug:
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