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I’d swallow bleach just to see you again.
I’d drown in blood and choke on death,
I’d release my dying breath
All to see you again.

I’d swing from a rope to see you again.
I’d let go and join the black sky,
I’d scream, scream until I die
All to see you again.

I’d down a storm of pills to see you again.
I’d rewire my veins and run lights,
I’d pick unwinnable fights
All to see you again.

I’d embrace red flames to see you again.
I’d play in roads and with knives too,
I’d kiss guns like I kissed you;
I’d have to,
To see you again.
When I drink, apparently my inner emo comes out to play.
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:iconfameisdead:
Fameisdead Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This reminds me of my best friend....
Still really good though :3
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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ShyCreativity Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This gave me the tinglies and I loved this, just perfect.
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KorrieEliza Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is so wonderful and I love alll of the things you write 
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AskTruMUsLuver Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
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AskTruMUsLuver Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
i meant gameaddict1234.deviantart.com/…
something happened to my browser and it didn't change the names of the user o.e
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pandaclaws7261 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn, right in the feel
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:iconderp-puppy:
Derp-Puppy Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
when i read this i remembered my grandpa far away from my country and he almost died.. Waaaah! 
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:iconjennyorlean:
jennyorlean Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
to see him again...?  :) (Smile) | Grr. 
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
To see her. It's about my mother. 
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:iconjennyorlean:
jennyorlean Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah i know i was thinking about a guy i know that i really liked and he disappeared.
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CaptainOttermoose Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful. the technique used herein, repitition, is the root of much power. it's an eye opener. this is absolutely necessary, something people wouldn't understand unless they understood, if hate makes any sense at all. just, please don't kill yourself, cuz I need more of your work!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! And don't worry, I won't. :hug:
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:iconcaptainottermoose:
CaptainOttermoose Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
*that*, not *hate*.
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OreoQueen01 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*looses voice* 
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconapplelilly:
AppleLilly Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
This is just... It's so... I'm so
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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AppleLilly Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Speechless, I'm speechless
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Orheathedreamer Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014   Writer
I like your use of terminology. 
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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PurryProductions-Inc Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww, so sad and beautiful
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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DLF66 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is a kick in the gut. Anyone who has ever lost someone that they loved has felt this way 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shit....
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:iconbittersweetwanderer:
BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS REALLY SAD NOT SHIT SORRY SORRY
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! :icontardglompplz:
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:iconbittersweetwanderer:
BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love you still. I can totally imagine you jumping on me and licking my face.....is that wierd?
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mythgirl61 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is beautiful and just oh so sad! 
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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mythgirl61 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome
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AmberChangling5000 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist
I read this while listening to Hurt by Christina Agueliera, (Don't know if it's spelt right) and I almost burst into tears. Wow.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconamberchangling5000:
AmberChangling5000 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you. Ciel and Lizzy (Affection) [V1] 
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HeavenlyClouds Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
if I could use this to tell my ex how much I loved him, I would 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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allythecat Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'd do this for my boyfriend…
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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allythecat Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hug 
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define-yourself Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Writer
I typically don't like dark poetry, but this gets across such a strong emotion. I think everyone has been there at some point. Very deep. Great job!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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:icondefine-yourself:
define-yourself Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Writer
You are quite welcome. :)
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DainTheDarkness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how clever it is.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Syomi Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow i did not type it 3 times D:
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:iconsyomi:
Syomi Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nevermind.... My phone was glitched
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Syomi Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A lot of people can relate, i know the feeling of losing someone i love. You probably want to die just to see them again. I read something of a woman killing herself so she can reunite with her husband. I haven't read much poems, but this is so far my favorite.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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Specklestorm Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
...Wow...
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