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I want to set my skin on fire
With Death’s icy embrace.
I want to make my head stop
And my broken heart race.

I want to fade into black
Like fog over the sea.
I want to save them the bother
Of worrying about me.

I want to bleed myself white
Until I really am just a shell.
I want to miss out on heaven
Just to escape this cursed hell.

I want to see her face again
So I can tell her my regret.
I want her face to leave me
So that I can maybe forget.

I want my friends to be happy
But I stop that from being so.
I want to lose all control
And let the red blood flow.

I want to leave this place
And abandon all breath.
I want to do something right
And that something is death.
Please let me know what you think. :)
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KittyKat708 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
I don't actually want to kill myself, and I don't think I really want to die. I just don't want to be here anymore. Like, I just want to stop existing for a while. Does that make sense?
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ey cool poem
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There aren't words to describe how well this fits my situation right now.

Well done.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:

Thank you. :)
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ithaswhatitisnt Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!! :hug:
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thomaskinsella Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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:D
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forbravery Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
I love the lines "I want to fade into black/like fog over sea" because it reminds me a lot of Alzheimer's or just forgetting entirely, and fog is normally foreboding, but you call to it and want it to come to you. I also like as the part in the fourth verse where you represented the dichotomy of wanting to see her but also wanting to forget her.
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