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It’s the taste of cake mix on the spoon, that first time you ‘help’ bake a cake.
It’s seeing the bright world afresh after a dark nightmare, when you first wake.
It’s when you make them laugh and, in that moment, everyone loves a clown.
It’s when your heart stops before the roller coaster plummets down, down.
It’s when the lights go out before your favourite band plays and you scream.
It’s that moment you look around and everything’s perfect enough to be a dream.
It’s the anticipation of waiting for a new episode of your favourite television show.
It’s the first time you listen to your favourite record and you just sort of know.
It’s reading a book cover-to-cover and a million times more and still crying at the ending.
It’s the stiff, tight, real feeling of a smiling scab as you watch the wound mending.
It’s when you first meet your best friend and you hate each other (but in a good way).
It’s the butterflies you get when you hear that they like you (or so your pals say).
It’s the feeling of rain dancing down your cold skin and clinging to your sodden hair.
It’s when that brilliant idea comes to you and you grin madly, making everyone stare.
It’s how the sun bites into your skin and scratches at your eyes, but it’s still stunning.
It’s that one time you get in so much deep trouble you have to laugh and start running.
It’s the soft, warm reassurance of someone else’s skin caressing against your own.
It’s having fun with friends and then remembering them when you’re just alone.
It’s being full of crazy, fantastic emotions and not understanding how they feel.
It’s having that one dream over and over and over and waiting for it to become real.
And it’s everything in between.
A (failed) attempt at writing something vaguely meaningful. :)
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curlyhair5342 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist
So touching. 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Skiyye Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ugh. So frickin good. I've been away from my friends and family for 3 months now on an exchange in France and this just brings tears to my eyes. I miss them so much
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
I love it.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
You're welcome, and keep up the great work!!!
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OfficialYGold Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing.. Thank you
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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flameheart10 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Beautiful and lovely! Wonderful! :heart: Bunny Emoji-18 (Shower Love) [V1] 
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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StormyRoyalz Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Aww sweet poem.gives me a childhood feeling.heart warming and touching.gets you right there
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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:iconstormyroyalz:
StormyRoyalz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Your welcome :hug:
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slimshadyzaboss Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
NOT FAILED that was freakin awesome!XD
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FoolsDisguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm very glad your other poem got popular of DA, because other wise I never would have seen this one. It's awesome. It made me feel -all- the feels. 
Awesome, simply, awesome. 
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TakataRikuzen Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"It’s when you first meet your best friend and you hate each other (but in a good way)."

i don't exactly know what that means, but it reminded me of when I first met my best friend, we were at a youth camp, and she was full on having a hilarious self righteous rant about this fancy car in the parking lot (I'd borrowed my dad's 2 seater convertible) and the girl next to her poked her hard on the side a few times, she went "WHAT?!" And the friend pointed at me and said "that's his car..." And she went red, hid her face in her palms, and folded herself in half, palmed face on her knees...

we've been great friends for over 16years now. She's a character in my comics too. Thanks for reminding me of such a wonderful memory... X'D
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artweak Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Looking at some of your writings I'm wondering if there's anyone better than you here at deviant art. umm... maybe not..
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HystericalSecretPoet Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
I love this :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :hug:
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Vallestin Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You fail at writing things that are NOT meaningful, gal, you mazing!
you deserve cake but all I can give you is a llama
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks! :D

Ah, that's okay; I prefer the taste of llama anyway. ;P
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Timberheart Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
the second to last line is my favorite
even though they are all amazing
this isn't vaguely meaningful to me :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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Timberheart Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
in case that was unclear lol
its more that vaugley meaningful ^^;
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hunterswithbowties Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I literally have happy tears in my eyes because this poems makes me remember all the positive things in live, and all the happy memories I have Hug 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :glomp:
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randomcatsrfuntolove Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You never fail me after reading one of your famous poems. You certainly have a gift and I will continue to read more as a faithful fan. 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very, very much! :hug: :glomp:
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Glacial-Moon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like how all/most of your poems have a sense of parallelism in them. Like in this one you have "it's" at the beginning of each line. 
The end line was just perfect! Nice way to rap it up.
Clap 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :glomp:
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chrisemmert Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
I really like that, thank you for posting it. 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you; I'm glad you liked it! :hug:
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hellokitty2005 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
"It’s that one time you get in so much deep trouble you have to laugh and start running."
I did that once.
Just got in more trouble :shrug:
anyway, awseomeness ^^
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha :D

Thanks! :hug:
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