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Misery makes me happy
Because it means I'm real
And pain makes me content
Because it makes me feel.

Sleep makes me tired
Because life's too short
And fun makes me bored
Because I know it's been bought.

Breaking makes me fixed
Because it makes me alive
And breathing makes me drown
Because life will deprive.

Lying makes me honest
Because it makes me me
And dying will make me live
Because then I will be free.
Please let me know what you think/how to improve. :)
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GilPires Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
So here's how it works, poetry is not something I give a lot of credit... most of the poems I read here on DA are overflowing with teenage hormones and suck... but once in a while there's this one that I like and relate to.
Congratulations.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much; it really means a lot to know that you like this! :D
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Ericchi Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Woww, you have a real talent for writing don't you now! *0*
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :icontardglompplz:
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student General Artist
If I did a SLIGHTLY creepy reading of this poem, and credited you, would you be happy?
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Go for it! And if possible, let me know how it turns out! :D
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student General Artist
On youtube. Just to clarify
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KittySib Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Awesome! So true and AWESOME!!!!! I :heart: this poem!:D
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm glad you like it. :)
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KittySib Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
:D
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