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I’m the kind of person
Who would kill to remember
But would die to forget;
Who has done awful things
But finds solace in regret.

I’m the kind of person
Who doesn’t like people
But is desperate for friends;
Who loves new beginnings
But fears oncoming ends.

I’m the kind of person
Who aches to be loved
But knows love is a lie;
Who wants to feel alive
But is longing to die.

I’m the kind of person
Who dreams of a future
But is stuck in the past;
Who always plays to win
But is eternally last.

I'm the kind of person
Who smiles at the sun
But is burning with cold;
Who wants to stay young
But is already too old.

I’m the kind of person
Who expects the worst
But tries to keep hope;
Who is good with a blade
But will end it with rope.
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kevinkamondo Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student Artist
This... Just like....  this is describing myself! Thank you so much for writing this! I used to don't know how to talk about myself the easiest way, and now I found your poem. This is so awesome!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :hug:
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luv-hate-relations Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student General Artist
this made me cry... *nodds head* you captured my soul in a bottle
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry it made you cry! :hug:
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SecretMarial Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This pretty much descibes me, exept for the last two lines, thankfully. Seriously, I read this and as I was reading I thought 'Okay, does this person read minds, because mine seems to be written out here.' The only thing not here that's in my mind is the obsessive fangirling! ^^' You really have a gift! *hug*
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lucarloroq Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
You wrote this about me, it must be about me. Anyways, great piece, love your writting.
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Submerged08 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*sigh* I can relate to this well... loving your works though c:
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:

Thanks - I'm glad you like my stuff! :D
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CLM87 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Oh god, this is the most amazing , effed up and relatable thing... X
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siddartha999 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
the duality... speaks to a place in my mind where the soul does not see, but the heart stares into... sometimes...
words fail me; not you thou...
saved "it isn't beautiful" a while back & will now add this one...
Thanks for posting...
" You know it can be beautiful, sometimes." Karl Wallinger @ World Party / Private Revolution [very recommended audio*]
Regards from Texas... I'll be reading more,
Will
* also readily recommending "Terror in Resonance" & "Tokyo Ghoul" for anime' viewing... if your into that sorta thing...
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your poems are so amazing and relatable and just ... Wow lol
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D


P.S. I love your icon. Gerard Way rocks! 
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:iconfameisdead:
Fameisdead Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol ^^ thank you!!!
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SkylarkTheCat Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Love it
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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SkylarkTheCat Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student General Artist
your welcome, it represents the way I can be sometimes :D
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darkborealis-chan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014   General Artist
beautiful
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconnadiaasan:
Nadiaasan Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Oh my god, you're so talented ! This poem is incredible...
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flamingdragonheart Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Excuse me but I believe you just defined me perfectly.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconflamingdragonheart:
flamingdragonheart Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D (Big Grin) 
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MythicalOne Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is me.
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zirman113 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Its comforting to know there are people out there that feel the same as I do. Lovely read.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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MissMurder1818 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is incredible. I'm speechless.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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nickie101 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good Clap 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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Pseudonym-chan Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh I love this poem so much
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks; I'm really glad you liked it! :hug:
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Pseudonym-chan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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OreoQueen01 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is me too much... you have talent and your stuff is amazing, don't stop making these please <3 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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OreoQueen01 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
(: xx 
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bluemelodia Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing poem, I can relate to pretty much everything you've written here.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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bluemelodia Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :)
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
All but that last stanza is relatable (the best quality in your poetry, I must say - blunt,  relateable truth). Anyways... I had a thought for here but it just ran away. All right... Still a great poem overall!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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fobkuriboh17 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can really identify with the second verse, but the whole poem is awesome. 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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fobkuriboh17 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :)
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Waffles-Of-Gondolyn Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely fantastic! Unfortunately, this is how I feel. 99% of the time. *sigh* 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!

:hug: :hug: :hug:
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Waffles-Of-Gondolyn Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome! (=
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xXRubyRosesXx Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
O. M. G.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Thunessey Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Student Interface Designer
You've seen my heart
And have read my mind
The cruelties seen clear
And exposed all which is kind

Black and white
Ongoing time
The dualities of life
Brought forth in rhyme

Hopes, dreams, fears
You've brought them to our ears
Happiness, tears, lies,
We've read them with our eyes

Don't stop these poems
They are salve to this soul
To know that another
Has in their heart such a hole.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautiful :hug:
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