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I'm just that fat kid
Starved of hope.
I'm just that cutter
Reaching for rope.

I'm just that dumb blonde
Reading all night.
I'm just that coward
Bleeding for a fright.

I'm just that child
Without care.
I'm just that girl
With messy hair.

I'm just that burner
Wanting to be cool.
I'm just that geek
Scared of school.

I'm just that emo
Smiling with glee.
You're just another drone
But you'll never be me.
Please let me know what you think :)
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TheAwkwardFangirl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This mirrors how my mind feels. This poem hasn't completely placated me, but I'm glad there's someone out there who understands. :D
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Hoshi-0461 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  New member
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
I really love it my friend, so many emotions, so much confusion, but that glimmer of hope even though it doesn't seem so. I do so love your work!!!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm really glad you liked it! :hug:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
I did, very much so!!!
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mythgirl61 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love this poem so much! It's amazing how I can read your poems and feel the emotions and see me in them. You're a great writer.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :iconunicornglompplz:
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zamadness Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
This was a very good poem and it made me think for a while. Wow great job
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :hug:
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MoonKunai Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So very simple,
and so very true.
We are what we are.
And that is what we will be.

Because this is for you,
as much as it is for me.
We are amazing.
We are unique.
And for that,
we will never truly be beat.

;)
You kick arse with your lines, girl.
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