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Sometimes I just feeling like crying,
Like screaming and dying
But I've gotten so good at lying,
You'd never ever guess.

Sometimes I talk and talk and talk,
Or simply go for a walk
Sometimes I'm cheese and sometimes chalk,
Who even is Me?

Sometimes I hate them and you,
Everyone else too
But then I don't have a clue
'Cause it hurts to be this lonely.

Sometimes I forget it all,
Stand proud and tall
But then I fall
And I'm in Hell again.
Just something I wanted to get out. Please let me know what you think :)
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:iconflamingodancer123:
flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
I hope you write a book someday.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's actually something that I'd really like to do. :)
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:iconflamingodancer123:
flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
well, then, you are well on your way!!  You are very good, you can do anything you set your mind to, just stay true to yourself!!!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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catdemonakatsukigirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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alibaby211 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. I found you because my friend linked to your poem I Need Feminism. I can relate so much to this poem and your work is just excellent and rather gorgeous
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very, very much! :hug:
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Caniyto Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Amazing!

I have a question: would you mind if I illustrated this, or any of your other poems?
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!

That would actually be really cool! If you do illustrate any of them, if you could give me a link to it I'd love to see! :hug:
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