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Sometimes I just feeling like crying,
Like screaming and dying
But I've gotten so good at lying,
You'd never ever guess.

Sometimes I talk and talk and talk,
Or simply go for a walk
Sometimes I'm cheese and sometimes chalk,
Who even is Me?

Sometimes I hate them and you,
Everyone else too
But then I don't have a clue
'Cause it hurts to be this lonely.

Sometimes I forget it all,
Stand proud and tall
But then I fall
And I'm in Hell again.
Just something I wanted to get out. Please let me know what you think :)
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lucarloroq Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
I don't if it's good or bad to relate to all of your poems
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconflamingodancer123:
flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
I hope you write a book someday.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's actually something that I'd really like to do. :)
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:iconflamingodancer123:
flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
well, then, you are well on your way!!  You are very good, you can do anything you set your mind to, just stay true to yourself!!!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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catdemonakatsukigirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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alibaby211 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. I found you because my friend linked to your poem I Need Feminism. I can relate so much to this poem and your work is just excellent and rather gorgeous
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very, very much! :hug:
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:iconcaniyto:
Caniyto Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Amazing!

I have a question: would you mind if I illustrated this, or any of your other poems?
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!

That would actually be really cool! If you do illustrate any of them, if you could give me a link to it I'd love to see! :hug:
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Caniyto Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
haha, no problem! I'll give you the link when I'm done Cx
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Natureisnatural Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Awesome. You described the feels so perfectly.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :hug:
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:iconfey-fae-whatever:
fey-fae-whatever Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
I know exactly how that feels. I've been feeling that way for weeks.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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truehero10 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
So true to me, nice poem!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This really describes me a majority of the time. Thank you for this. It sickens me how some seem to appear as flawlessly cheerful. This time, they must feel like this poem.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconiceangel1234:
IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
In fact I heard it a few times today.. I feel like objecting but.. I'm too shy naturally.
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silentblackblood Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice... uvu
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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E3N2C8 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I really like this.
Like other people said, it's easy to relate to this, and it's well written.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :hug:
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:icone3n2c8:
E3N2C8 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
You're welcome!
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hotcocoa54 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
This is very easy to relate to. I like it. :) 
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks; I'm glad you liked it :)
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:iconmisdmeanor:
MisDmeanor Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, been there one too many times. Well written :)
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm glad you like it :)
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:iconmisdmeanor:
MisDmeanor Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome :)
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:iconnessfan123:
NessFan123 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
(sighs)
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Huh? :)
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:iconnessfan123:
NessFan123 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
A dear friend of mine would describe her experiences very similarly to your own...
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha :)
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:iconnessfan123:
NessFan123 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
It's not funny...
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry. I just find bad dye jobs pretty funny, especially my own. :)
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:iconnessfan123:
NessFan123 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
Hm...
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's better to laugh than cry, right? :D
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