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Smiling at me, shiny silver teeth
Begging my wrist
For one chaste
Kiss.

Grinning at me, that evil smirk
Making my heart pound
Going berserk.

So sharp so
Good
I know I
Could
And really I
Would
Because I
Should.

Arm’s too full of blood
Of scars
From attempts to
Join the stars.

Photo album of
Ruby caresses
My diary of my
Crimson lament
Showing one
Statement;
I am still
Alive.
This is kinda different from my normal style of poetry, so sorry if it sucks.

Please let me know what you think. :)
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Sakura-Yotobari Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So beautiful, so true. <3
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is amazing. I, of course, know this very poem has meaning to you, and I love it!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm soooo glad you like it! :glomp:
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Happiness is my duty!:)
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ValentineRevenge Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This speaks just too true to me. In a good way though, as in the 'It's touching to the point that why are you touching me in that way, that's too personal for comfort'
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student General Artist
<3 so good! very different!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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CheeseLovingChester Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As a matter of fact, this is really good, and I am very happy to see you back again :3
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm happy to be back! :D
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ReonMerryweather Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Professional Writer
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asylum-of-the-angels Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This just made my heart race...wow, there's just so much thought and meaning in this, I can just feel it in every word. It's really good.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm extremely pleased that you thought it was alright! :)
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asylum-of-the-angels Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
being honest is very different to having an opinion.
it was really good, thats a fact :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icontardglompplz:
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bonesofliars Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really quite good! I was listening to a song while I read it, and I think it could almost replace the lyrics. xP
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! May I ask what song it was? :)
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:iconbonesofliars:
bonesofliars Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Something off of Three Days Grace's new album, can't remember at the moment. Might've been Expectations or The High Road. (Currently obsessed with the album, haha)
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