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Smiling at me, shiny silver teeth
Begging my wrist
For one chaste
Kiss.

Grinning at me, that evil smirk
Making my heart pound
Going berserk.

So sharp so
Good
I know I
Could
And really I
Would
Because I
Should.

Arm’s too full of blood
Of scars
From attempts to
Join the stars.

Photo album of
Ruby caresses
My diary of my
Crimson lament
Showing one
Statement;
I am still
Alive.
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This is kinda different from my normal style of poetry, so sorry if it sucks.

Please let me know what you think. :)
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~BittersweetWanderer Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is amazing. I, of course, know this very poem has meaning to you, and I love it!
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*CorporateRockWhore Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm soooo glad you like it! :glomp:
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~BittersweetWanderer Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Happiness is my duty!:)
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~ValentineRevenge Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This speaks just too true to me. In a good way though, as in the 'It's touching to the point that why are you touching me in that way, that's too personal for comfort'
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*CorporateRockWhore Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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~Perfection273 Jan 8, 2013  Student General Artist
<3 so good! very different!
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*CorporateRockWhore Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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~CheeseLovingChester Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As a matter of fact, this is really good, and I am very happy to see you back again :3
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*CorporateRockWhore Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm happy to be back! :D
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=ReonMeriwether Jan 8, 2013  Professional Writer
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