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If I told you a lie
But it made you smile
Would it still be a sin?
If I opened the door
But turned you away
Would you still come in?

If I sliced my skin
But it didn't hurt
Would it still be wrong?
If I acted all brave
But couldn't face it
Would I still be strong?

If I tied my noose
Around a tree's open arms
Would it be an embrace?
If I left tonight
And begged you stay
Would you still give chase?

If I committed sin
But hurt nobody
Would I be welcome above?
If I do something you hate
But only for your good
Could it still be true love?
Just a little thing I came up with, I hope you like it!

Please, please let me know what you think! :)
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cdj001 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
awesome :) double thumbs up
<3 love the way you write
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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cdj001 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
hey you are welcome and its I that should thank you for sharing your words :) i will be sure to read more of your stuff
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mollx-rose Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Artist
love it!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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TheIcey-Love Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great piece :) i havent read many pieces of poetry like this
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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TheIcey-Love Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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pingelot Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
LOVE IT <2
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS! :D
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