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If I told you a lie
But it made you smile
Would it still be a sin?
If I opened the door
But turned you away
Would you still come in?

If I sliced my skin
But it didn't hurt
Would it still be wrong?
If I acted all brave
But couldn't face it
Would I still be strong?

If I tied my noose
Around a tree's open arms
Would it be an embrace?
If I left tonight
And begged you stay
Would you still give chase?

If I committed sin
But hurt nobody
Would I be welcome above?
If I do something you hate
But only for your good
Could it still be true love?
Just a little thing I came up with, I hope you like it!

Please, please let me know what you think! :)
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cdj001 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
awesome :) double thumbs up
<3 love the way you write
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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cdj001 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
hey you are welcome and its I that should thank you for sharing your words :) i will be sure to read more of your stuff
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mollx-rose Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Artist
love it!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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TheIcey-Love Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great piece :) i havent read many pieces of poetry like this
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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TheIcey-Love Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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pingelot Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
LOVE IT <2
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS! :D
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GilPires Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Thumbs UP!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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LegendofZeldaGirl Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is amazing, you bring up some very good questions that I have had too.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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LucyxKay Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
I simply love this!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'm really glad you like it! :D
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Janee018 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Artist
That is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read :O nearly made me cry :'(
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :hug:
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Janee018 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Artist
You're welcome! :D
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CheeseLovingChester Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're just so good at stringing words together, it's amazing..
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :hug:
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AllisonWolf Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing poem! I could read it over and over again honestly! It's really deep ^^
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :D
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LegendaryJD Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)
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1ianda Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
God it felt like I was rediscovering this from deep within my own mind
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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hopefalter Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
great i love it
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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why-so-seri0us Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I reeeeeeeally like the last stanza. A lot! :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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why-so-seri0us Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~!
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013   Writer
I liked the imagery, good job, I enjoyed reading this! :)
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013   Writer
ur welcome!
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caprijw Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful <3
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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caprijw Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :D
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asylum-of-the-angels Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you know what i think, what i always think with your writing....stunning.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :icontardglompplz:
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Qwebeck Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really nice...
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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Storylines14 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
amazing
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I'd love to leave a witty comment, but I never know what to say.
<3
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;P <3
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I don't know how I feel about this, these are my emotions:
<3 </3 :( :) :3 :D =D ^-^ ;w; D:
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icontardglompplz:
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:iconmysecretstoryaccount:
EEEWWWW YOU LIKED MY HEAD :c
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;P
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