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Don't call me childish,
When you treat me like a child.
Don't call me crazy,
When you drive me wild.

Don't ask me for help,
When you've left me to drown.
Don't ask me to smile,
When you've made me frown.

Don't make me fight,
When you can't defend.
Don't make me be honest,
When you can't pretend.

Don't tell me to dream,
When you're my nightmare.
Don't damn me to hell,
When you're my only prayer.

Do save yourself;
It's too late for me.
Do ignore the rules;
For me, set yourself free.
This is definitely not my best, but y'know.

Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think.
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:icontalentlessartlover:
TalentlessArtlover Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Until you're dead, it's [link] :)
And who's to say that, even then, it is? :meditate:
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gotta love a good bit of Three Days Grace. :iconrockonplz:
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:icontalentlessartlover:
TalentlessArtlover Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Indeed. :D
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mayorofunkytown Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
It's an interesting back and forth. Originally it left me with a sense of hopelessness, but after looking at the last line again I reinterpreted everything in a somewhat more positive way.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm glad the positive aspects of it got through in the end. :)
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I might use this as lyrics for my band. With your permission, of course!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, I'm very flattered but I'm gonna have to ask you not to. I'm in a band myself and so pretty much everything I write gets put into that. Sorry. :hug:

Thanks though! :D
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:iconbittersweetwanderer:
BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay! It's fine!
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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ad08star Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its really interesting... Sometimes or somewhere we do feel that way... (atleast i do ) :)
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