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Allegory rules the world,
Angry, lonely, little girl.
Begging for life by praying for death,
Understanding love but hating breath.

Black lies in spider silk,
Smothering all the voices.
Screaming truth by spreading the lies,
Hearing them all but ignoring the cries.

Heartbreak and heartbeats,
Drowning out broken hearts.
Beating hate by feigning glorified love,
Confined by life but free as a dead dove.

Crimson hopes flooding out,
Killing the pessimist's child.
Singing silence by bleeding it away,
Losing religion but aching to pray.

Killer fame striking hot,
Taming the soul I loved.
Playing the game by sitting it out,
Knowing it all but nothing about.

Sharp amethysts stab deep,
Reminding me of my you.
Showing me care by letting me die,
Listening long but not hearing me cry.

Headphone hospice healing hearts,
Death started by life's poison darts.

Hell's hearse harking hollow hate,
Taking me away from this berate.

He held hearts, he hurt her head,
He's him and I'm her; both better off dead.
Just some angst-ridden poetry, formed whilst listening to a mixture of The Academy Is... and My Chemical Romance (especially "Mama" and "Demolition Lovers").

Please let me know what you think. :)
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Adonis0 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How do you manage to write so many good poems...

Maybe a challenge that you could try?
What about writing a poem on the opposite theme to what you normally do, it seems to be that all your poems have a darker lighting to them, although they are still beautiful and amazing poems, they all seem to be in a gothic light so to speak. Have you ever tried writing a poem on the "lighter" side of life so to speak?
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks!

I definitely see what you mean and I accept the challenge! I'll try my hardest to write a "lighter" poem as soon as I get inspiration. :)
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Adonis0 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's an idea to expand out your portfolio and your skill set. You're an amazing poet, doesn't mean that you shouldn't aim to improve either.
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Barnesanity Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow I love it! The flow is really good, and I liked the structure as well.~
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm extremely pleased you liked it! :D
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PhoenixAndFirebird Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem fits my mood perfectly. And so cleverly written :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :hug:
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WitchKayla Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
this is beautiful i love it :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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WitchKayla Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
you are very welcome!!
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