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It's always just a little bit,
Just a little bit more
But deep down you know the score
Because there'll always be
Just one more.

Tell yourself whatever you want
Whatever you wanna hear
But deep down you'll always fear
That dangerous idea of
Just one more.

Lie to everyone 'til they see
'Til they see you for you
But deep down they'll never see through
'Cause there's that precious
Just one more.
I know it's short, but I hope you like it.

Please let me know what you think. :)
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ValentineRevenge Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This was great, but I hope that in your case there doesn't turn out to be 'just one more'. Cause the one more usually brings it's friends.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Always welcome :D
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forbravery Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Writer
I think that the beauty of this poem is that it is applicable to nearly any situation, that even if there isn't one more, you might fear or expect there to be. It should be met by a poem that talks about the horrors of not having any more.

Check out some of my poetry, if you have the time, I've been told its a little lyrical like yours. If you like what you see maybe you could consider watching. :3 for now I'll favorite this and watch you. Thanks :3
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. I'm glad you think it's applicable because that's one of the things that I was aiming for with this. :)

I'll be sure to be checking it out when I have the time; thanks for the fave and watch! :hug:
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forbravery Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, did you get a chance to check out any of my work?
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rainismysunshine Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
This sounds like it could be the lyrics to a song. :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was kinda hoping for that effect. Thanks! :D
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