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If I could kill you I wouldn’t,

Because the absence of you,

Would kill me too;

Kill me twice as dead as I am.


If I could run away I wouldn’t,

Because I’d be out all alone,

My heart on loan;

I’d go insane thinking of you.


If I could tell you I wouldn’t,

Because it just can’t ever be,

That you’d like me;

Zombies just don’t get love.


If I could make you mine I wouldn’t,

Because I’m just your friend,

Here to the end;

This agony keeping me alive.


If I could make you happy I would,

Because I love your true smile,

Makes living worthwhile;

The thought that it could maybe be for me.

Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think. :)
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DarkLondonDreams Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw..i love it. The poor guy. love so frustrating. I feel him. Good work :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! It's meant to be from a girl's point of view, but thanks anyway; glad you liked it! :D
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xxAgonisticMiseryxx Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
Oh my god. (':
Why is it that your work always brings tears to my eyes?
Anywho... I loved it,
It was heartbreaking, and relateable.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much; I'm really pleased you liked it! :D
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xxAgonisticMiseryxx Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
You're welcome :)
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