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Why are you gone?
No. I know why.
It's not like you didn't try,
Maybe I should have too,
Maybe then,
I wouldn't have lost you.

How could you lie?
No. I know how.
You, too, were scared to bow.
I shouldn't have made you lie,
Maybe then,
You would be here to stop me cry.

Where did you go?
No. I know where.
Turned to dust in a fiery flare.
I wish I'd made you stay,
Maybe then,
You could fight the tears away.

When did you die?
No. I know when.
When now changed to then.
I wish I could've saved you,
Maybe then,
I could just pull through.


What did you do?
No. I know what.
You left me to die here too.
Just a little poem, dedicated to my mum.

Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think. :)
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Adonis0 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You shouldn't write things like this..

I nearly got teary eyed in the middle of a Chemistry lecture :c
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry. :hug:
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Adonis0 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry about it

It's very beautiful
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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Karen-chanOVERDRIVE Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
I love it!!!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh.
My condolences.
Keep writing, you are amazing.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :hug:

I just checked out your YouTube channel by the way, and you've got some serious talent! :D
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks. did u sub?
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeppers. On both my channels (canweeatyou and Ellora Sutton). canweeatyou is the one I share with my friends/do more stuff on. :)
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