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If you need a reason to live,
Is your life worth living?
If you have nothing to give,
Don't expect people to keep on giving.

If you're smiles are lies,
Have you ever not been lying?
If this is your best try,
Why the hell are you even trying?

If your heart wants to sing,
Open your soul and start singing.
If a cut is but a sting,
Then let me soothe the stinging.

If every truth is a burn,
Then learn to cool the burning.
If you need to learn,
Trust yourself and just start learning.

If you want to leave,
I won't stop you from leaving;
Just don't say you believe,
Because without hope, what is believing?
I'm not too sure if I like this or not. I just felt like it needed to be written, even if it does suck like a whore.

Anyways, please let me know what you think! :)
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:iconmegalotty1998:
megalotty1998 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
i gotta say you have a very good rhyme and rhythm to your poetry
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much! :D
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DecemberMidnight Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012   General Artist
Your poetry sucks. :|
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:iconraindropsonmywindow:
RainDropsOnMyWindow Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Were you being serious? I couldn't tell. xD
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know.
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EricDaneislovex3 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this favoriting :D
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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:iconericdaneislovex3:
EricDaneislovex3 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :)
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Karen-chanOVERDRIVE Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
I like the last line.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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