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I would like you to meet someone.
Say hello to
Future You.

Future You
Smiles and laughs.
They are healthy
And wealthy
In love and joy.

Future You
Can take on the world,
Sings along to every song,
Is right where they belong;
They just wish that
All along,
You knew it would be okay.

Future You
Has so much to say,
About how they got
To be this way;
But the main thing is
‘Thank you’ for
Carrying on
Day after day.

Future You
Has a life,
A love,
A light,
And they say;
‘Trust me,
Everything will be
Alright’.

Future You
Loves themselves
And they
Love you
And,
One day,
You will
Too.
:)
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TheSapphireSigma Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
This looks like some great lyrics to a song :3 I love it !
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Flameboy007 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
One of your best ❤️
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The feels... :3
i think my heart just smiled Hug  Thank you for writing this ^^
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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skromnost Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked it, serene somehow.I think often of future me.
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otherland78 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
oh that was good made me smile ;-)

very touching thanks :_)
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The-Orifice-Oracle Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Student Writer
What astonishes me is how true this can prove to be.
It seems inspirational poetry comes out best when you pose something (a life-state, in this case) that may sound utterly impossible to fulfill, then introduce a process by which to reach that goal (persevering to the end). You motivate your audience and achieve what you set out for.
When you write, do you have a preferred set to model your work like mentioned above? Or does it come from whatever is on your mind?
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NICHOLAS-MARK-AMOS Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A lot of what some other people have already said + You're uplifting vibe is most refreshing on the darker days.
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lovemondotrasho Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My goodness, I can't begin with this poem.  I am completely in love with it.  I'm coming out of a dark time of my life, and this is just what I needed.  Future Me is the reason I'm carrying on (I'm going to say it right now; I teared up when I saw that part because it reminded me of the song "Carry On Wayward Son" and then tomorrow's Supernatural s9 finale and a;dlfjadls;kjf) for that brighter and happier me. 

Future Me loves me the way I am and I hope that the day I can come to accept myself is a day that is relatively soon.  *begins to blubber all over the keyboard* Oh god, Supernatural feels on top of these feels. Sob Emoticon 
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