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Cross my wrists and hope to die,
I will only ever lie
When you ask me if I’m fine
Or if I like this life of mine.

If I had a gun,
I’d put it to my head
And turn bouncy blonde,
Into ruby red.

You want me to stop cutting;
I’ll stop when I’m dead.
The last time I’ll cut
Will be the last thing I see
When I finally put an end to me.

Dying sounds good right now,
Just fading into black
And never coming back
To the agony living brings.

Perhaps you’ll find me hanging,
Or bleeding,
Or after OD’ing;
Someday soon you’ll find me,
Finally free.

It’s too late now,
I’m too far gone.
Now I’m just a ghost
Of who could’ve been someone.
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:iconsimplywolves:
oh jeez this brought tears to my eyes. you are a great poet, with words and conveying emotion through those words.
amazing poem   
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CorporateRockWhore 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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ak311294 Apr 10, 2014  New member
you are an amazing poet and i know how you feel
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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DrCrazyWolf Apr 8, 2014  New member
Be strong man. Never go back to the world of pain. Go to the world filled with happiness. Hug * hugs *
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CorporateRockWhore 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :glomp:
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:iconblight3131:
I enjoyed the beginning a lot. it was actually what drew me in. Keeping the strong and emotional vibes throughout a poem can be challenging but you did it well here
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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RaphAndRoll Mar 16, 2014  New member Student Traditional Artist
I know the feeling all to well.
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