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Cross my wrists and hope to die,
I will only ever lie
When you ask me if I’m fine
Or if I like this life of mine.

If I had a gun,
I’d put it to my head
And turn bouncy blonde,
Into ruby red.

You want me to stop cutting;
I’ll stop when I’m dead.
The last time I’ll cut
Will be the last thing I see
When I finally put an end to me.

Dying sounds good right now,
Just fading into black
And never coming back
To the agony living brings.

Perhaps you’ll find me hanging,
Or bleeding,
Or after OD’ing;
Someday soon you’ll find me,
Finally free.

It’s too late now,
I’m too far gone.
Now I’m just a ghost
Of who could’ve been someone.
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NightsWarriors Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Stay strong, ellie.

This is beautifully written, and Im speechless... All I have to say is, this made me teary eyed .
 
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BatflashIsMyDrug Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Do you wanna know why I hate you? Because you're such a goddamn amazing writer and you make me so fucking emotional every time I read anything of yours. You should be published, every single person on the face of this planet should be speaking your name because you are wonderful. You are truly wonderful and I love it. Never stop writing... EVER.
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SimplyWolves Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
oh jeez this brought tears to my eyes. you are a great poet, with words and conveying emotion through those words.
amazing poem   
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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ak311294 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
you are an amazing poet and i know how you feel
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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DrCrazyWolf Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Be strong man. Never go back to the world of pain. Go to the world filled with happiness. Hug * hugs *
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :glomp:
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blight3131 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
I enjoyed the beginning a lot. it was actually what drew me in. Keeping the strong and emotional vibes throughout a poem can be challenging but you did it well here
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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