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Nobody gets it.
I don’t want saving,
I don’t want ”friends”;
I just want all ends
To be met in red.

I hate how plain my skin is,
How it should be painted;
Scarlett.
I’m the addiction’s harlot,
I do as it must dictate
And when it tells me to seal my bloody fate;
I bloody well will.

I’m too full of blood,
I need to let some out.
But know this isn’t a shout
For help;
This is me coping
With how I’m hoping
Nobody’ll care when I go.

Cutting isn’t for attention;
It’s for a brief suspension
Of everything else.
It is mine and I’m its,
It doing as I want
And I its slave
Until there’s nothing left to save.

I don’t fear death
Half as much as I do breath.
Because I’d be lying
If I said dying
Wasn’t on my list of things to do today.
Meh. :)
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squareofpie Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
wow, it's beautiful.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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NinjAPixiEX3 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally love that last part.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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Evalnia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very well written. Simply :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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Evalnia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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justfate Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
awesome as allways mate can my band use it youll get full creted
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D

Again, this one's pretty personal, so I'd prefer it if you didn't. Sorry.
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
"Because I'd be lying
If I said dying
Wasn't on my list of things to do today."
That really speaks to me. Your writing always does. It reminds me of my recent past, struggles I still face, and struggles I see others facing now.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Stay strong. :hug:
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Writer
Your welcome, and I plan on it. :) :huggle:
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inexorableFAIL Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I really like the lines " I don't fear death / half as much as I do breath". I always love reading your writing, it's so personal and relatable
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much; I'm extremely glad that you like my writing!! :D
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apsilpastille Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your writing is amazing. <3 xxx P.S I always read your poems twice; once in my head and once aloud.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :glomp:

I've never read my stuff out loud. Perhaps I'll try it. :)
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apsilpastille Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It flows really well. LOVE IT. <3
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SparkAllie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
This reminds me of slam poetry- I bet it would sound awesome read aloud. :D
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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