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Cold words on my mind
Like grey waves tasting a beach
Washing me away.
A crappy two AM first attempt at a haiku; I apologise. Please tell me if the syllable count is wrong! :)
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cattservant Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
... where there is motion
there is life...
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TheresNoSuchThing24 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist
I can't believe this is a first attempt (Though I am a firm believer that some people's best work is produced in the early hours of the morning) at haiku, it's very...poignant... 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
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Pseudonym-chan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't believe you could do this at two am! It's hard to make a haiku stand out, but you definitely do that in this one :D
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :hug:
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Pseudonym-chan Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :D
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Writer
I think the last line really hit home for me. Great job! I'm terrible at haikus myself. ^^; 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
You are welcome! :hug: 
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Lyrically-Sadistic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You suck. Please die in a fire.













































Just kidding, I love you. Excellent haiku, CorporateRoxzorzmyboxorz.:iconyourockplz::iconthumbsup2plz:
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