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You are
My brother
You're not
My lover.
They called me
A dumb whore
You said
I was more.

You are
My best friend
Here to
The end.
They hurt me
So badly
But you fixed
Me gladly.

You are
My leader
Not just
Some bleeder.
You gave me
So much
To keep me
In touch.

You are
More than
My trusty
Sure plan;
You are
My brother
Better than
My lover.
Definitely not my best, but I hope you like it.

Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think. :)
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:iconzerami:
Zerami Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was a beautiful description of a close friendship. Love it! :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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silvioricardonelli Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
good. I like it.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks; glad you like it. :)
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TiaPrincessNews Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's pretty good. Very strong feelings
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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TiaPrincessNews Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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CheeseLovingChester Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it :3
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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Luciedeandreis Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I. Love it!!! I'm. So close to my twin brother it totally describes how i feel for him
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :)
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MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that'smy life story right here, im a tomboy, and allot of guys like me becuz not my looks, but how i act, and since im into games and soccer and just being myself, allot of guys seem to take my friendship as a way to become more when really their like a brother to me
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I feel your pain. Apart from I don't play soccer (that's like English football, right?). :)
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MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yea i was born in england, and so when i came here, ppl misunderstood, so i was shunned for a week -_-
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That sucks. :hug:

P.S. Do you by any chance like Hetalia? If so, you are awesome. If not, you are awesome anyway. :)
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MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YES I LOVE HETALIA i love romano he may be a outraged italian, but i still love him... hatin on them potato-bastards
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gotta love Romano. He's one of my favorite characters, along with Canada and Liechtenstein. :D
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MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes ditto with me!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
No words.
I wish I was that close to my siblings.
I kind of just ignore them.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This isn't about my actual brother, but rather my best guy friend. And from what I know of siblings, it's probably for the best to just ignore them. ;P
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Perfection273 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Hey, a fake brother is better than no brother.
And yeah, you're probably right.
At least they've all moved out by now.
:p
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ShadowAmyshadamy Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amzingly typed
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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ShadowAmyshadamy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome^^
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lolcats313 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
I love it!
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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netherworldsnowlady Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how the lines are short and fragmented...gives it an edgy vibe. ;) Darn, I miss my old writing class!!! :D
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'm relieved you like the shortness of the lines, I wasn't too sure about that myself! :)
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NinjAPixiEX3 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really sweet<3
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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EasyPop Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel the lines are a bit too short; but, I love the meaning all the same.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I did the short line thing on purpose, but I can see why you don't like that part of it; I wasn't too sure about it myself. Thanks! :)
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Lady-Luck03 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Professional Writer
Short and sweet, yet powerful. I like it.
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much; I'm pleased you liked it! :D
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Lady-Luck03 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome
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