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You are
My brother
You're not
My lover.
They called me
A dumb whore
You said
I was more.

You are
My best friend
Here to
The end.
They hurt me
So badly
But you fixed
Me gladly.

You are
My leader
Not just
Some bleeder.
You gave me
So much
To keep me
In touch.

You are
More than
My trusty
Sure plan;
You are
My brother
Better than
My lover.
Definitely not my best, but I hope you like it.

Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think. :)
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:iconzerami:
Zerami Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was a beautiful description of a close friendship. Love it! :)
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :D
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silvioricardonelli Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
good. I like it.
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks; glad you like it. :)
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TiaPrincessNews Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's pretty good. Very strong feelings
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:icontiaprincessnews:
TiaPrincessNews Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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CheeseLovingChester Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it :3
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:iconcorporaterockwhore:
CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconluciedeandreis:
Luciedeandreis Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I. Love it!!! I'm. So close to my twin brother it totally describes how i feel for him
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