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If you cut you'll bleed
If you bleed you'll die
If you're sad you'll smile
And if you smile it's a lie

If you lie you'll live
If you live you'll die
If you cheat you'll win
And if you win you'll cry

If you cry you'll lose
If you lose you'll die
If you run you'll stay
And if you stay you'll fly

If you fly you'll fall
If you fall you'll die
'Cause no-one will catch you
If your life is a lie.
Just a little poem I wrote whilst procrastinating.

Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think/how to improve. :)
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AshFitzpatrick Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Student Writer
All of your writing is so graceful, and it all rings true to my personal experiences which I haven't been able to put into words before. Your way with words is beautiful
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very, very much :glomp:
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jessie0wessie Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just rediscovered this in a search, have to say, it's still awesome
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ElectricViolet52 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
I'm jealous! How come you get to write such good poems...? Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] 
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you very much! :hug:
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ElectricViolet52 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
No, prob, I haven't commented on the sweet poem about your sister (if she isn't, sorry!) yet, but it's one of my favourites! My sister used to be cute and innocent, but now she's a completely kid altogether...oh, and don't feel like you're weird, I'm bff's with a cat, a forget-me-not plant and two imaginary friends. Strange world, huh?
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Pseudonym-chan Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Woaaaaaaah that was awesome :D
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CorporateRockWhore Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Pseudonym-chan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem :D Your poetry is amazing
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Sakura-Yotobari Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, you are such an amazing artist, you must have a very beautiful mind! 
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